Do you love or hate your life?
Love it!brbrSometimes I wish I would have made different choices here and there but that is part of life and I love it and I cant wait for the next wonderful thing to happen. I have two wonderful and healthy children. A man that loves me and a good job. Life is good!
What is a good youngadault book that you like?
I need to find a good book to read.
Do you like nonfiction? quotIbn alHaytham First Scientistquot tells the fascinating, true story of a medieval Muslim scholar who overcame bouts of mental illness to develop the scientific method two hundred years before the Europeans learned of itby reading his books. It was just chosen by California Readers to be part of the California Collection. You can find reviews of the book and a sample chapter at httpwww.ibnalhaytham.neta If you order from that website, the author will sign the book and inscribe it to whomever you wish.
Do you truly believe what goes around comes around?
if you do good or bad things,yes it can effect your future.what you do are dont do effects your future.sometimes things just happens.the way you express yourself can give an effect.if you tell yourself,today sucksit will.if you say,i dont feel well today you will not feel well.if you walk into a bar thinking you will have trouble there,you will.bad and good happens to us all,sometimes without our control.most times we bring it on our selves,the choice is up to us.
Do you think this is an OK poem? Im an ispiring author and can deal with constructive critisism.?
When you look at me,
I tend to agree with the comments by SPOOKY relating tobrbrtechnique.brbrThe goal of the poet is to convey to the reader something brbrof themself, and while it is true that to some extent, brbranything you write is fine, the reader must be consideredbrbras well.brbrbrLiterary devices as mentioned by spooky are the quottoolsquotbrbrthat you use to help readers understand you better.brbrI like to think of creating poetry in the same way as I dobrbrcreating a meal. A good chef needs the right quotTools of thebrbrtradequot as well as the right ingredients and a good recipe.brbrLike all things, it takes time and practice, and to use mybrbrcooking analogy again, while your meals may no be to brbreveryones quottastequot, all can appreciate the art of the chefbrbrnonetheless.brbrbrYour work shows promise, and the fact that you ask for brbropinion shows that you take it seriously enough to acceptbrbrcriticism and make yourself vulnerable to strangers.brbrbrKeep up the good work. Read poetry written by others and brbrsee examples of style, metre and other devices.brbrbrGood LuckbrbrJimmybrbrP.S.brbrA good forum for your works is to post them on Yahoo .brbrIt makes them easy to find and new works posted here maybrbrlead to people viewing your other work.brbrFeel free to view a few of my works on my page and votebrbrfor any you like.
